Fragments
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| photo by me |
Fragrantly misting, Spritzing
Savory caramelized vanilla and macadamia
Perfectly garmenting the air
Savory caramelized vanilla and macadamia
Perfectly garmenting the air
Music, habitually-music
A soul wrenching melody
Coupled with distant Friday morning laughter
Thoughts wrap like fleece
Upon a needing body
Warming to inspiration
Words trailing in and out
In... out...
Bleeding upon paper
Puddles of emotion
Droplets of feelings
In... out...
Bleeding upon paper
Puddles of emotion
Droplets of feelings
Written for dVerse Poets Pub
https://dversepoets.com/2021/12/02/mtb-picking-up-some-pieces/
I like this one a lot. It's broken, jerky cinematic images but the tone links it into a poem that almost makes sense
ReplyDeleteThank You! It's exactly what was happening around me as I wrote!
DeleteReally liked this, and nothing beats the clutter of sounds in that first stanza, and meanings too, which gently settle, fade, by the end...wonderfully done
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteYo Dana — I am in the half-sleep insomniac bloom of zolpidem, but I like your work. I will return when I am once again razored out to write a ringing comment! ✌🏼❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks! I appreciate you dropping in and your welcome back anytime!!
DeleteI loved reading this poem with its fragments of sound ("Music, habitually-music") and moving (literal and metaphorical) lines
ReplyDeleteThank you! I often receive a lot of my inspiration/motivation from my senses and surroundings!
DeleteI like the comfort of the beginning... so much like home, until the end comes and we realize the darkness inside.
ReplyDeleteIt's definitely a mixture of sensory and emotion! I tend to lean in that direction with most of what I write. Thanks!
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