Feasting On You
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| Feast in the House of Simon, 1610, El Greco |
Feasting upon your eyes
Savoring warm
Strong
Flesh
Strong
Flesh
I hunger for your smile
Laughter...
Words
Words
Your vitality meshing
Within mine
On a bed of hot coals
On a bed of hot coals
Dana
For Magpie Tales
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wow and yow- hot bed of coals!
ReplyDeleteHahaha... Thanks Kathe for stopping by!
DeleteThe passion on a hot bed.....................yes!
ReplyDeleteInventive and sharp, nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
Delete"Feasting upon your eyes." This line implies so many things. Being fed by the views of another--by the way they sense the world (if we are feeling positive). And the dark side, that reminds me of "we'll eat you up" from Maurice Sendak's Where the Wild Things Are.
ReplyDeleteI love the way your mind works!
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I love that you got all of that from one line!! One of the best things about writing is hearing others thoughts on how my words make them feel! Thank you!!
DeleteWords are a magical thing, particularly when they are written in the right order. ;-)
DeleteI like your interpretation.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteVitality meshing....what a grand combination!
ReplyDeleteYes it is!!
DeleteYou did very well for having no words.
ReplyDeleteI also like your Hello to the side.
Thank you Gail! This is the first poem I've written in awhile!
DeleteJesus was a carpenter .....and a good sort !
ReplyDeleteYes he was!
DeleteWow crisp and beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I appreciate you stopping by!
DeleteHot stuff this poem!
ReplyDeleteHaha... yes it is! Thanks
DeleteHot hot hot! Love it...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess!
DeleteHot stuff!
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