Imprisoned Torrents

Imprisoned Torrents

Photo credit: can131 from morguefile.com

My loves...
Can't you see the boards
Nailed across my chest
To keep the storm of emotions
From bursting forth
And sweeping those off their feet
Who choose to ignore my love
~ Dana

For Wordsmith Studio's Creative prompt
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Mariya KolevaSeptember 19, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Wonderful. And so strong!
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Sabra BowersSeptember 19, 2013 at 7:27 PM
The boards didn't hold the feelings down. This poem is filled with feelings. Some not mentioned.
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Julia TomiakSeptember 20, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Very nice, and perfect for the prompt! Awesome photo too!
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To have great poets... there must be great audiences
~ Walt Whitman

Thank you for being that audience!

Hello...

I struggle with picking my brain; scooping out thoughts laced within each other.There are so many to choose, therefore I have nothing to say.Untangling them in order to focus on one proves to be rather complicated.That's what happens when your me.Don't confuse it with being shy, it's more like being deep.

Sit with me awhile; provide me with some quiet encouragment.As words appear in a ghostly form to hang before my eyes, ideas begin to materialize.Sentences flow freely from the tip of my pen.A story is fast approaching.My mind is no longer in the present; I am no longer me.Notice my meditation, but do not disturb.I can not tolerate disruption.

My escape from reality is short lived; I have been productive in my absence.I have written.Whatever it has become is no concern to me.It's all the same; my thoughts and dreams.You are welcome to take a peek anytime you please.

Dana