All We Need Is...
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I search for you
On a thousand faces
Caressing the marks of time
And pain
Within the places that have
Slipped through the cracks
Forever hiding in shame
I reach for you
With constant embraces
Examining the souls
Of the sad
There
You can be harvested
Polished and glorious
Waiting to be recognized
... and applied
Because you reside
In all the races
Within all aspects
Of life
Dana
~ For Wordsmith Studio and dVerse Open Link Night
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You've written about a valuable search and you have written an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing and giving us the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabra!! ... and your welcome!
Deletetrue that, it does reside in all races and all aspects of life...we just need open eyes to see it sometimes..nicely penned dana
ReplyDeleteThank you Claudia!! Yes, we often keep our eyes closed to the things we should see and we see the things we shouldn't.
DeleteDoes take the blinders being pulled away, for all to view it in such a way, great message indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patt... I just love the comments that you leave!!
DeleteThis is a lovely message ~ Indeed it resides in all of us, regardless of color and background ~
ReplyDeleteIt does... and we need to use it! Thanks Grace!
Deletesmiles...love the spirituality of this..or that i find it in...as i see the touch in all lives...for sure...smiles.
ReplyDeleteIt does hold some spirituality for me as well... an aspect of it that we don't pay nearly enough attention too. Thank you Brian!
DeleteThere's a string of universality in us all that connect and challenges us to see beyond prejudices. Well penned capture here :)
ReplyDeleteExactly... I don't know why we haven't evolved enough yet to see that! Thanks!
DeleteThere is a sense of the search for the spiritual here for me--lovely!!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I guess you could say that!
DeleteSo beautiful. This made me think of the human condition and how our experiences, though so personal, are universal.
ReplyDeleteYES!1 Exactly... love is universal and it's right there at our fingertips. Just take it... use it!
DeleteBeautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala!!
DeleteSo inspirational, if it's who I think it is.
ReplyDeleteI'd never tell anyone they interpreted my poem wrong... it is what it is for everyone... different. If you thought anything at all about my poem... then I've done my job! Inspirational... spiritual... Yes!!
DeleteThis poem has a wonderful universal quality to it! Well expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary!
Delete..i can feel this could be set to music... it is in itself reads musical to my ears... loved it... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThat is an awesome compliment... I've been trying to write songs lately, but it hasn't worked out to well! haha Thanks Kelvin!
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