Submerged
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The look in your eyes
Calls to me...
Drawing me into your quiet mind
And I am submerged in beautiful thoughts
Your voice quietly whispering
Your dreams
And I listen entranced
Like never before
As I float
As I float
Dana
~ Written for Poetics @dVerse Poets Pub
Please leave me your thoughts below!
Very beautiful... I love the way it sort of fades away.
ReplyDeleteThank you JoAnn! I really appreciate you stopping by to read!!
Deletesmiles...sounds like a peaceful moment..floating...nice...there can be so much in someone's eyes...right..
ReplyDeletePeaceful... full of awe at what you hear and feel! Letting yourself get lost in someone... all things I miss!
Deletesmiles....listening is beautiful thing, esp when we truly do it...and submerge into someone as you have in this....
ReplyDeleteIt is a beautiful thing... you truly know you care about someone when you can lose yourself within their words and mind.
DeleteI love the feeling of floating before someone's eyes ~
ReplyDeleteIt's that feeling you get when your so wrapped up in someone... their eyes, their face... listening to the beautiful thoughts that spill from their mind.Thanks Grace for stopping by!
DeleteThat is just beautiful, Dana.
ReplyDeleteOh, I so know how this feels... it's so soft, so lovely. So, perfect as is your poem describing it.
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