Push Pinned
Photo credit: jfelias from morguefile.com
You cradle my likeness
In the palm of your hand
As you push pins
Deep into it's heart
Jabbing... Jabbing... Jabbing
Until you are certain
Nothing more remains
Dana
~ Written for Poetry Jam
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frig...harsh....but there are people i know that def would...scary pic to go with this too....
ReplyDeleteNo love to be found here ... great write!!!
ReplyDeleteOuch! Sounds like VooooDoooo to me..
ReplyDeleteYikes! I know there is this kind of person out there. Definitely the OPPOSITE of love! So glad to see you at Poetry Jam.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds sad... great write.... may be what love has to do with it....
ReplyDeletethis is what i call "tortured love" but literally tortured! {smile}
ReplyDeletethank you for participating at Poetry Jam!
♥
dani
Definitely not Pinterest. Although I've seen some pins on Pinterest that would apply.
ReplyDeleteGreat image -- both the picture and the word painting.
That's definitely not Pinterest we're talking about here.
ReplyDeleteGreat image -- both the photo but, more importantly, the metaphor in the poem.
Ooooh, so not the good kind of love!
ReplyDeleteWow...this I can thoroughly relate to! The perfect metaphor for a broken heart. Great job with this. :)
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