A Painted House
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| Picture by Dana Dampier |
Morning Solitude
Penetrates wood pores
Awakening A Painted House
Luring anxious Windows and Doors
To fling outward accepting
The decisive Suns spotlight
Baptizing it in an ethereal glow
As birdsong fastens the mood
Dana
~ Written for Open Link Night @dVerse and BloggyMoms Writer's Workshop
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nice...some really cool natural elements in this...the wood...the sun the bird song...i like the use of baptized as well in this...i find peace in your words today...
ReplyDeleteIt was a very peaceful morning and nature does that to me!
DeleteDana, this is a beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala!
DeleteYou painted a beautiful morning. :-) Nice one. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Imelda!
DeletePleasant to read your description of dawn...
ReplyDeleteThank you! The house is the main focus in this poem, but the dawn is simply wonderful too!
DeleteVery visual, sensual also (maybe it felt sensual because I'm in Paris, everything seems sensual ;) Very nice, evocative poem.
ReplyDeleteI'm feeling a tie-in to Dickinson's House of Possibility. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletewonderfully written!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this. It's a great response to the prompt!
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